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I thought it was excellent, I would have no suggestions to make the atmosphere or mood more clear it was descriptive enough, especially since with just a few well placed words our imagination can fill in what being in a prison or dungeon is like, I like the use of the word "bedraggled" it goes a long way in conveying the idea of being in a hopeless state in a rundown nasty cell that I want to get out of.